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托福作文系列|#01

小樹業餘時間打的各種零工裡面,有一項是修改英文作文,大多數是論件計酬,修改苦海中的高中生考大學的英文作文,或是想不開要出國唸研究所的托福和GRE作文,修改作文其實有很多層次:
最基本的是單純把拼錯的單字改正、把文法修好
>再多一點是把重複使用的字詞,根據學生的程度替換成其他同義字,來增加用字的豐富度。
>進一步可以整個句子的架構重新安排,在不大幅度調整文意的前提下,換成更流暢的句法。
>要求更多的就是文章的“內容”和“本意”如果不夠對題,給予建議和修改的方向。
>最後是在尊重學生原意的前提下,以“如果換我來寫,我會這麼說...”的方式重寫一篇。
幾年下來修改過的文章加起來也不少,總覺得應該花些時間好好的自己也寫一遍,檢視一下自己的成長(如果真的有長大的話XD),於是就出現了今年唯一的新年新希望:
每週一篇托福作文紀錄
算是給自己一個繼續耕耘探路客的作業吧💪也歡迎探友們給我各種建議讓我繼續進步!🏝🏝🏝(為什麼是椰子樹??XD)
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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
To date, most people attend college or university after high school instead of joining the job market. In my opinion, people choose this path for several different reasons as follows.
First and foremost, people go to college to acquire knowledge and skills they are interested in or consider useful in their future career. In college, there are scholars and professors who spend their lifetime in certain fields and hence become experts who could provide the best learning environment for the students to thrive.
Second, people may hope to broaden their minds by meeting different people with a variety of cultural backgrounds in college. Working together with classmates or organizing events with clubmates could spark new experiences and ideas that will enrich the students' life.
Third, people might go to college to explore and discover their own interests. They are lots of courses for students to choose from. Students could realise their potentials and reach different opportunities by utilizing the resources colleges provide.
In conclusion, I think most people attend college to learn skills and knowledge, broaden their visions and minds, and find their interests. College and university have the resources to support a healthy environment for students to flourish.
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在嚇人的未來裡,我只求能像一棵小樹一樣,默默地平安地長大。

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